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Monday, 18 February 2019

100 word challenge


WALT Using the picture as a prompt write 100 words telling me what has been going on

On the first day of 2019 a bunch of people came to Australia. They were all really colourful with bright red heads.I was thinking they were here for help but they started breaking everything . It was really loud it was like BANG BANG BANG! . We rang the army and they said “ We are on our way” so when they arrived the people had moved closer .They came     
rushing over to the army. The army got scared and left . So we were on our own so we went to battle them. We go some down but there were three left .
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  1. Mrs Cassidy30 May 2019 at 21:46

    Hello Tia.What an interesting way of writing.We didn't do anything this fun when I went to Primary School.Did you find it hard to use only 100 words?I think I would have been stopping and starting all the time to count how many words I have used.

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  2. Mrs Cassidy6 June 2019 at 20:37

    Hello Tia.
    This is just to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
    Have a good day.

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    1. Tia7 June 2019 at 12:19

      Thank you miss Cassidy Enjoy your day too

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