WALT use a technique to carefully craft our writing .
Titanium
If i didn't go to school, if i hadn’t run away, if i wasn’t here then none of this would have happened . I was shocked, scared, and worried Wishing I could be like a normal boy and not be a villain. I ’m sitting in the hallway near my classroom. Slowly I walked down the hall and out the door. Riding my bike quickly I go home. My hands are shaking; sore legs; sweat dripping off my face. I was almost alone but then the cops caught me then .
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