Wednesday, 24 May 2017

  WALT use a technique to carefully craft our writing .
                                                                                    If i didn't go to school,  if i hadn’t run away, if i wasn’t here  then none of this would have happened .  I was shocked,  scared, and worried Wishing  I  could be like a normal boy and not be a villain. I ’m sitting in the hallway near my classroom. Slowly I walked down  the hall and out the door. Riding my bike quickly I go home. My hands are shaking; sore legs; sweat dripping off my face. I was almost alone but then the cops caught me then .

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